Caitlyn Sinclair hides her
magical need for souls behind her job as an assassin in the Miscreants
Guild—the home of spies, thieves and assassins. She is a SoulEater, a mage who
uses the aural energy of other people to fuel her spells. She has no choice but
to take those lives, because without the infusion of life-force she will die.
She's made a home for herself in the city of Ellemarlene, until the day she
executes her Guild Master and is cast out. Her only chance at survival is to
join the Mage Guild and embrace her magical nature. To become a terrible
weapon, someone with the power to wipeout entire towns.
Amazon
Book
review by Melissa Snark:
Author
Beth Caudill engages in excellent fantasy world-building in her novella, ASSASSIN'S
SOUL. Her story features a rich medieval culture and an interesting variety of
races and classes living in the city of Ellemarlene, which is ruled by a
council of seven representing the seven guilds. I periodically play RPGs
and this story made me feel like I'd walked straight onto the set of a Dragon
Age campaign. (A good thing since Dragon Age is amazing.)
The
writing is solid with good editing and the dialogue sounded natural. Some
awkward wording in places that gave me pause–I don't like instances of
"you" used in third person perspective. Also, I can't entirely sure
the prologue was necessary as it is primarily back story. However, it did serve
as a nice vehicle for introducing the primary characters and their
relationship. Secondary characters were distinct and well developed. For
some reason, I latched onto a relatively minor character, Nathan Deering, a
Master Thief, hoping he'd become the primary romantic interest.
Caitlyn
is a fun, hot-headed character. Female assassins aren't common and the fact
that she retained a moral code about who she killed made it possible for the
reader to remain sympathetic. She is also a psychic vampire, always an
interesting concept who must feed periodically by taking a life. The author
develops the concept in a unique way to make it compatible with her magical
system.
The
heroine's psychic vampirism serves as the basis of internal conflict and drives
all of her choices. It is not a matter of choosing to kill or not, but rather
determining who to kill so that she doesn't take an innocent life. The
politics of Ellemarlene provide the external conflict, starting with a corrupt
guild leader and building toward an attempted coupé by another guild.
ASSASSIN'S
SOUL is an exciting retelling of the heroic journey. For fans of fantasy
adventure with a romantic twist, this offering from Beth Caudill is sure to
please.
Although Beth grew up in West Virginia, she currently
resides in North Carolina with her husband and two sons. Blending the
analytical and creative sides of her brain, she delights in creating fantasy
worlds for others. Catch her online most days except when NCIS and Once Upon a
Time air.
Email: beth@bethcaudill.net
Hi Beth,
ReplyDeleteWelcome back! I'm glad I finally had a chance to read your story. I've posted the review to Goodreads and Amazon.
Hi Melissa,
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading my book and writing a great review. I've linked to this page from my website book page.
Sure thing! You're welcome to repost the review to your site if you like.
DeleteExciting storyline and a great review. What more can an author ask for. Happy Dance for you.
ReplyDeleteThanks Charmaine.
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